I enjoyed this book more for the friendship that formed amongst the four girls, than the romance developing between the main characters.
Some of the descriptions are a little distracting. (Her hands like butterflies suspended mid-flight, his chest hair like fleece/coarse velvet, a whimsical smile... C'mon. SRSLY?) But I just skimmed over or ignored those bits. I also skipped over most of the descriptions of kissy and sexy time. Which just shows that, take all the bits that make this a romance novel (the love story and soft pr0n), and you still have yourself a memorable cast of characters. Good job.
Off to read the rest of the books in the series.